Author Topic: Does this work III ?  (Read 5301 times)

Malc

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Does this work III ?
« on: February 08, 2007, 03:52:54 PM »
I had a definite punchline in place for this, then I chopped and changed it. Now it's nearly 2am and I don't know whether it works.

Offline Mince

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #1 on: February 08, 2007, 04:00:17 PM »
Yes, it works. One wonders what would have been said if the two were male (and if Elizabeth was male).

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #2 on: February 08, 2007, 04:15:16 PM »
Yes, it works. One wonders what would have been said if the two were male (and if Elizabeth was male).

"Tosser or what?!!"

Yes, Malc, it does.
I apologise, in advance.

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #3 on: February 08, 2007, 04:18:02 PM »
Those objects on the table aren't casting shadows.

Malc

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #4 on: February 08, 2007, 04:18:39 PM »
I deliberately chose women as the protagonists (a) I'm targeting a womens mag and (b) it takes on a whole new slant using women instead of fat businessmen, one which doesn't necessarily alienate fat sexist businessmen. Bit cynical, maybe, but.... er.....yes. Harrumph.

Malc

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #5 on: February 08, 2007, 04:21:06 PM »
The objects on the table are from Hank Marvin's new shadowless range (dist. by Executive Paraphernalia Inc.)

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #6 on: February 08, 2007, 06:49:38 PM »
It works. 100%.

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Re: Does this work III ?
« Reply #7 on: February 08, 2007, 07:15:45 PM »
99.5% - no shadows on the desk.