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Beau Peep Notice Board => Just a Fort => Topic started by: Malky McG on December 22, 2006, 12:32:05 AM

Title: Does this gag work?
Post by: Malky McG on December 22, 2006, 12:32:05 AM

(http://www.cartoonaustralia.com/malk/PG%20antiques.gif)

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: The Peepmaster on December 22, 2006, 12:52:42 AM

I like it, Malcolm. I've recently done an Antiques Roadshow one myself.
(http://www.nigelsutherland.co.uk/images/antiquewouldhavebeenworth.jpg)

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: Malky McG on December 22, 2006, 03:45:47 AM

That one works well. Not to be cheeky, or patronising, because your gag's as good as mine, but I think it doesn't need the "whizz" lines.
The fact that the object has just smashed to the floor is clear enough.

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: Tom on December 22, 2006, 04:01:52 AM

Well I like both of them.

They both remind me of a lot of TV shows on now... all the same, with a bit of difference squeezed (squoze?) in...

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: colcool on December 22, 2006, 06:39:21 AM

They both work well. Just on different variations of a theme.

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: Roger Kettle on December 22, 2006, 07:39:11 PM

Both excellent. If I'm slightly leaning towards Malky's, it's because of my childish appreciation of swearing. It's what big boys do.

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: The Peepmaster on December 23, 2006, 10:30:03 AM

Quote from: Tom on December 22, 2006, 04:01:52 AM

I once met a guy from Peru
Whose limericks stopped at line two

I once knew a chap from Dundee
Whose limericks stopped at line three
Not line four or five,

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: Mince on December 23, 2006, 10:35:11 AM

My limericks just stop at line one.

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: Mince on December 23, 2006, 11:04:43 AM

There once was a man from Dartmoor
Whose limericks stopped at line four
They started so well
And then went to Hell.

Title: Re: Does this gag work?
Post by: Malky McG on December 23, 2006, 03:07:37 PM

There was a young man from Afghanistan
Whose limericks didn't quite scan,
He nearly got it right
One dark and freezing cold night,
Until he realised they didn't rhyme either.