I'm writing a review of the songs as they play in the background, as it's easier to keep the points fresh. Please don't get offended at my superior tone.
In My Time: There's a missed opportunity to filch a gag here. When the singer reminisces about how he could got to the shop with a few francs and come away with loads of stuff, maybe the blonde could be jettisoned in favour of a couple more valuable items. the punchline could be: "you couldn't do that these days - too many bloody security cameras"
The song is obviously a demo, played on a digital keyboard. In the actual performance, I think it could be started on a single instrument, perhaps played by a performer on stage (even a kids xylophone), but joined later by increasing instruments from the house band, building up to a crescendo. It's a great parody on an "Impossible Dream" type showstopper, it needs that big treatment. I like this song.
